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The achievement I'm probably proudest of is learning to swim properly in my late twenties, which might sound like a strange thing to be proud of given most people manage it as children, but I'd had a fairly bad experience near water when I was young and had more or less avoided it entirely for about two decades. It took roughly eight months from the first lesson to actually being comfortable in open water, which was slower than the instructor's usual timeline, mostly because the first few sessions were less about technique and more about just not panicking every time my face went under. What I had to do, beyond the physical practice itself, was work through a fair amount of the original fear, which the instructor was surprisingly patient about — she spent almost two full sessions just having me stand in the shallow end getting used to water near my face before we did anything resembling actual swimming. I'm proud of it, I think, less because of the swimming itself, which plenty of people do without a second thought, and more because it's the clearest example in my adult life of deliberately walking back into something that used to genuinely frighten me and sticking with it long enough to come out the other side differently. It's changed how I think about other things I avoid, too — there's usually less genuine danger in them than the avoidance itself suggests.